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Republicans are excluding people of America to vote. They disenfranchise the voters by requiring
them to have a picture ID. Regular people in America don't have an ID, because
it's not needed anywhere else. And passports are uncommon, since only the
wealthy travel. Another option for getting a picture ID is owning a gun. So you need to be wealthy or own a gun to
vote, and since the majority of Republican voters are rich liberalists and gun
owners, they secure that only a selected part of the citizens can vote, and the
selected part votes for The Republicans. By doing so they take away the voting
rights of the ordinary people. The law of having an ID is a tool made by the
Republicans to ensure they win elections.
af Christian, Ida, Gustav & Samuel
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SvarSletGrammatisk er der et par ting at kigge på:
1. To exclude someone FROM something + det trækker ing-form. Dvs. den rettede sætning skal se således ud: The Republicans are excluding people of America from voting.
2. Requiring THAT they have a picture ID. Sætningen skal enten omskrives med en præposition, "...requiring OF them to have..." eller med en that-sætning, som i dette tilfælde.
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