1.
The relationship between the locals
and the police isn’t very good, but there are one of the “brothers” there are
in the police. It sounds like the police is in the neighbourhood every day
because there are some kind of crime inform of gangs. The locals joke with the
police because they just are there to put anyone in prison because they live
there.
2.
The language is informal and relaxed
when we here the locals talk, but when it is the police then is it very formal
because they have this job they have.
3.
Page 19 line 28, because
it’s the reason that the police is right on this place.
Page 21 line 25, its were
the go to the room with dead dog.
Page
24 line18, it describes the situation when a man is shot in Harlem.
Jonatan Stage
1. It is a good paragraph; you defiantly got the right side of the story, especially at the part with the police who just want to arrest all of them.
SvarSlet2. I think you are right on this one also, it is a relaxed language between the people who live in the neighbourhood, and it is more formal when it is the police who a speaking.
3. Maybe it would have been a good idea with the quote on the post, so the reader could see it and the reason why you had chosen it.